Thread:Dailywhisp/@comment-25404524-20160308030610

I appreciate your addition of what happens in the Continent song, however, your sentence structuring had very poor paragraph structure and was very "this happened then this happened then this happened...". I would consider mentioning all of the most main parts of the song and making the description concise, not long-winded as you had done (which had been reverted by Forevakill). 