Thread:Lookiecookie0404/@comment-35732694-20180723233604

I know you came here for it, so here it is. I fixed the grammar and loose plot holes along the way. Also, everything is Kid Friendly.

Once there was a Shellbeat that had made lemon pie. Also, Shellbeat liked Stogg. Shellbeat and Stogg disliked seeing arguments between so many baby monsters. After they ate their pie, they planned to go shopping. Scups needed twenty-five diamonds to pay his taxes. He knew monsters were usually taking Shellbeat’s money. Scups knew that he had to take Shellbeat’s money. But Shellbeat then realized Scups was sick already because he drank expired milk, thinking it was water. Shellbeat needed to work for his mom to earn some money. But then, some monsters left, and other collected milk from a Woolabee. This Woolabee had golden milk so powerful that one drop could cure all diseases. So he was happy to share. Suddenly, Shellbeat got put into a diaper by a small Furcorn in the basement. The small Furcorn then fell into a box. However, he found Stogg. Stogg then sang a song. Grandma Torrt was taking care of Baby Noggin, until Baby Tweedle went to check on Shellbeat. But she realized that she and Shellbeat were also with Grandma Torrt. She also found monsters still collecting milk from Woolabee and a bottle full of water. Seven days later, Torrt was still babysitting. Tweedle saw a note. It said, “Please close, it smells bad.” Screemu then opened it. Meanwhile, Drumpler got sleepy. But then he left, and Brump walked off with Screemu. They noticed a very bad smell coming from the closet down the hall, with the bottle. Shellbeat couldn’t stand it, and accidentally spilled water on his diaper. They opened the closet to get a fresh diaper, but they also saw seven bottles with labels. Then, Shellbeat got changed after midnight, so then they slept. However, Tweedle needed a large amount of monsters. She found Brump, who gave her a button. It played a song, which caused the bird to freak out. The bird pressed a button, which played loud noises, which woke up the sleeping monsters. Drumpler used a lullaby on them. Tweedle awoke in a calm state. She thought she was safe. But then she found a box that made Brump appear. However, it was from another world. Everything was actually fake, it was a dream. She woke up, scared. Shellbeat said to Tweedle, “You’re here with me.” Tweedle replied, “Where are we?” Shellbeat said, “In the special room. The special room is a room full of puzzles. Help me solve them.” The first puzzle involved a button. The ceiling began to lower. They thought they finished the puzzle, but instead, they got directed to a place called “BXR”. They were scared, but then they woke up. It was a dream, or so they thought. Suddenly, water came from a Spunge. It was bad! They woke up, confused, but reappeared in the special room, still sleepy. “This is crazy!” Shellbeat said. But they teleported to another room. It was the Water Room. The bad Spunge appeared and pressed a button. Suddenly, they switched bodies! They were dreaming and they were still themselves. After that, they truly woke up. Then, a Gheegur appeared. Tweedle couldn’t take it anymore. She began crying. In the real world, Wublins were taking over. Drumpler noticed Tweedle and Shellbeat. He told them, “It’s just a bad dream.”

But they didn’t wake up. They were in a game. Drumpler was actually Spunge. Pummel quitted, and noticed a Wublin appear! He wished he never played this game. But then, Pummel remembered what he had to do. He had to win for all of them, or get hurt trying. He got to squish Shellbeat’s cute diaper, but he realized the Wublins appeared. Cleverly, Pummel discovered a lot of things in a chest buried beneath Wublin Island. He used the items to get rid of the Wublins. Pummel did it. After that, he saved the others. Pummel got a friend. He forgot something though. The bad Spunge returned! The Spunge then fell asleep. He said, “Where’s Tweedle?” Tweedle became very sick, and then she fell asleep. Tweedle called out for help. She needed a hero. But Tweedle was sick. She didn’t trust Ghazt, who put young Stogg to sleep. Ghazt sent her to the black hole. She came ready though, because she had corks. Corks are known to block black holes. She put it in, and it worked! She cheered. After that issue, she saw a door. She didn’t open it, it opened itself. Tweedle didn’t go inside it. She saw another door. She went inside, and saw “Air Control”, which lead into the bathroom where Shellbeat was waiting. But a Litten went. She cried. The tears showed a die on the changing table that Shellbeat was laying on, while being snuggled by an adult Shellbeat. She tried to go, but she was still stuck in the bathroom with the Shellbeats.

She saw a pipe, which water came out of, filling her cup. She drank the water, started to get dizzy, and entered W3954’s realm. Let’s just say it was very bad. Rare T-Rox’s Mega Form crushed the rules and RPs. It went from bad to worse when Rare T-Rox ate her. Tweedle drop kicked out of him, and saw Humbug. Humbug flew in and sprayed her with very bad stench. It smelled very bad! It made Tweedle cough, and she fell asleep. She woke up, and found herself back in the Water Room. Inside the room were a screen, a fan, and water. She drank the water, but it tasted very bad. Tweedle got scared, and saw Humbug on the screen, laughing at her. Humbug laughed at Tweedle and entered the bathroom. Humbug regretted his choice. Humbug flied into Jeeode’s secret plane. The room had changed to normal, or at least that’s what they thought. But it wasn’t! Humbug was inside, hidden. His mother had a bad plan to make him sick. His father hated Shellbeat and Humbug, and he tried to put them to sleep, but then he realized Humbug wasn’t in the same room as him. He found an different plan. Humbug, he realized, was special. But Shellbeat couldn’t be put to sleep, because he had magical powers because of his top hat. Meanwhile, Tweedle got cured by wishing on a star. She fell into a fish tank and nearly got sick. The water smelled very bad. She escaped, but Humbug laid fifty eggs. Grumpyre took the eggs, hugged Kayna, and went away for being special. In his new place, he started exercising. Meanwhile, a different Humbug sprayed Tweedle with air freshener because Tweedle smelled very bad. Humbug realized he was controlled by Rare Reebro, who was bad. Humbug made Tweedle very sick, who managed to survive, but was horribly hurt and had to recover. After a week or two, she was feeling better. Shellbeat took her home. A surprise party got set up the second she got there and everyone except Tweedle got sick. Just kidding, everything went well.

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