Thread:Dailywhisp/@comment-25404524-20160308030610/@comment-4627764-20160308074214

Rather than just putting what order the monsters sing in, why not describe what the monsters song sounds like? (e.g. As soon as the Phlanger finishes their second line, the Sooza finally joins the song, providing a powerful bass-line to the mix)

You can also describe the general tone of that specific part. (e.g. "After this, the Sooza begins playing a more reserved melody, and both the Tweedle and the Furcorn begin their parts, giving the song a much softer tone, giving contrast to the epic piece that precedes this one.)

I deleted that text because I thought it was spam and not anything relevant to the article. I see now what you were trying to do, but long, repetitive text with no paragraph breaks is very hard to read, it also discourages people from reading the text entirely, wasting all of your hard work.